- the author takes four whole paragraphs to refer to rap as 'music' (with quote marks)
- he pens this hilarious sentence: "His complicity with rappers dates back to at least 2006."
- he cites as evidence of hip-hop's misogyny a line from Jay-Z's "99 Problems" that is actually about men
- he refers to Q-Tip and Will.I.Am as "thugs"
- he wonders if any rappers have donated money to Obama, and then asks if Obama will return their possibly nonexistent money